I think this is really nice, i'm also doing this brief for AS level and i think yours is 100 time better than mine.
I guess that means i'll try and improve mine.
sorry for the late response.
thanks for the review!
you should put your composition on newgrounds, so i can hear what it sounds like, so i can give you some help, or useful concepts to add to your piece!
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